My favorite
vacation was the 2015 summer holidays.
Firstly I had three months of vacation, the longest vacation of my life.
In addition, I played a football tournament with my neighborhood friends. The
tournament had 10 teams. I didn´t know how, but we won the 5th position. But
the best moment in that vacation was the camping scout on Rengo. The last
camping scout (2014) was in a bad place, but that year (2015) we stayed in one
of the best places ever. I had very funny activities, I ate a lot of food and I
met people very important for me.
Also, that was the last camp of my childhood friend Victor, my bosses Nella and Anibal and my other childhood friend Franco. If I think the finish of that camp was really sad, but I want highlight one thing, in Rengo I met a so special person who I was in love in all of 2015…and now yet.
Also, that was the last camp of my childhood friend Victor, my bosses Nella and Anibal and my other childhood friend Franco. If I think the finish of that camp was really sad, but I want highlight one thing, in Rengo I met a so special person who I was in love in all of 2015…and now yet.
The summer
holidays of 2015 were my favorite vacation because I lived a lot of
experiences. 2015 was the year when I started the university and that vacation
was the introduction to a great year. That was an excellent start of the year.
Hello Seba, sounds good! could I go with my family? or it's necessary go with a big group of people?
ResponderBorrarmmm... I think this depend yours preferences, beacuse I only want go out with a big group if that is my scout group xD
BorrarHI Seba c:
ResponderBorrarooow what place in Rengo do you visited? I think I hadn't asked that yet e.e
As a suggestion, I can tell you that when I read the second sentence thought maybe say "Firstly I had three months of vacation, the longest vacation of my life" might sound better
Thanks Javi, you was a excellent comment.
BorrarI dont know, any place from Rengo xD.
I will comment your next blog ?) I promise.
Hi Sebástian! That football tournament sound very interesting and entertaining :D
ResponderBorrarMy suggest is very simple, in second sentence you could have said "(...)the longest vacation of my life" that's all c:
P.D.: GO RAYO MOTHERFU****!!
I see you in another life brother
Thanks Migue.
BorrarYour comment help me so much.
My favorite vacation was the 2015 summer holidays. (TS)
ResponderBorrarFirstly I had three months of vacation, the longest vacation of my life. (SS1)
EXPLANATION? COMMENT? EXAMPLE?
In addition, I played a football tournament with my neighborhood friends.(SS2)
The tournament had 10 teams. I didn´t know how, but we won the 5th position. (EXPLANATION)
But the best moment in that vacation was the camping scout (SCOUT CAMPING??) (on) IN Rengo. (SS3)
The last camping scout (2014) was in a bad place, but that year (2015) we stayed in one of the best places ever. (EXPLANATION)
I had very funny activities, I ate a lot of food and I met people WHO ARE very important for me.(COMMENT)
Also, that was the last camp of my childhood friend Victor, my bosses Nella and Anibal and my other childhood friend Franco.(SS4)
If I think the [finish] END!! of that camp was really sad, but I want TO highlight one thing,(EXPLANATION??)
in Rengo I met a PERSON so special (person) who I was in love WITH (in) all of 2015…and STILL AM (now yet). (?)
The summer holidays of 2015 [were=PLURAL] [my favorite vacation SINGULAR] because I lived a lot of experiences. 2015 was the year when I started the university and that vacation was the introduction to a great year. That was an excellent start of the year. (CONCLUDING SENTENCE)
Sebastián,
The structure you gave your text was very good, there were two sentences at the end which seemed disconnected, they are relevant though…pay attention to the singular plural consistency, some word order too. Good.
Cheers,