The eating disorders are a big problem in the
actual Chilean society.
Firstly, anorexia, bulimia and overweight have terrible consequences on people's health, diseases like fatigue, ulcers or high blood pressure are the principals, but there are many more diseases and this is apart of psychological problems and self-esteem that may have. Secondly, Chile is the 9th country in the world with most overweight. The explication to this situation is because the Chilean society had a change in the feeding patterns in the 90´s decade (Del Aguila, 2013). Thirdly, Chile is 1st in the South American ranking of childhood obesity. In Chile, mainly in the countryside, the people think that a fat child (“well fed child” in Chile) is a healthy child.
Firstly, anorexia, bulimia and overweight have terrible consequences on people's health, diseases like fatigue, ulcers or high blood pressure are the principals, but there are many more diseases and this is apart of psychological problems and self-esteem that may have. Secondly, Chile is the 9th country in the world with most overweight. The explication to this situation is because the Chilean society had a change in the feeding patterns in the 90´s decade (Del Aguila, 2013). Thirdly, Chile is 1st in the South American ranking of childhood obesity. In Chile, mainly in the countryside, the people think that a fat child (“well fed child” in Chile) is a healthy child.
In conclusion, the statistic it is clear,
Chile have eating disorders and this disorders produce problems in the peoples´s health. Taking all this into account we can say that in Chile the eating
disorders are a big problem to the society.
I dont thought that the eating disorders was so bad in our country!! But is true that topic of food are a topic very big. You know that exist many researchs that relates problems of overweight with social class? Is very interesting, think how your economics status can to influence too in aspects how the eating behaviors
ResponderBorrarThe numbers say very negative things about chile, that's worrying DD:
ResponderBorrarwow men this is so worrying, we have to eat more healthy!!
ResponderBorrarby the way... GO RAYO MOTHERFU****!!!
I see you in another life brother
I am shocked, i couldn't belive the position of the ranking!! It's necessary find a real solution to this huge problem
ResponderBorrarTS: [The] eating disorders are a big problem in [the actual] TODAY'S Chilean society.
ResponderBorrarSS1:Firstly, anorexia, bulimia and [overweight][YOU USE "OBESITY"; "OVERWEIGHT IS AN ADJECTIVE, NOT A NOUN] have terrible consequences [o]In people's health[,] [;]
EXP:diseases like fatigue, ulcers or high blood pressure are the principal[s] ONES, but there are many more diseases and this is a--part of psychological problems and self-esteem that may have.
SS2: Secondly, Chile is the 9th country in the world with [most overweight] MORE OBESITY.
EXP:The [explication] EXPLANATION to this situation is [because] THAT the Chilean society had a change in the feeding patterns in the 90´s [decade] (Del Aguila, 2013).
SS3: Thirdly, Chile is 1st in the South American ranking of childhood obesity.
EXP:In Chile, mainly in the countryside, [the] people think that a fat child (“well fed child” in Chile) is a healthy child.
C: In conclusion, the statisticS [it] is clear, Chile [have] HAS eating disorders and [this] THESE disorders produce problems in [the] peoples´s health. Taking all this into account we can say that in Chile [the] eating disorders are a big SOCIAL problem/ A BIG PROBLEM FOR SOCIETY [to the society].
Sebastián, your structure is fine, you need to edit your grammar though.